boring track not techno 69

[juodas]

https://soundcloud.com/solomana/simonas ... ue/s-J3uhM sorry i'm drunk

[Mimui]

the low end needs some more attention.
I didn 't analyze the track or don 't have the speakers atm to see if there 's something with the low end.
But the fact that it 's sausaged an still silent means probably it has to much of it and needs attention
with a bit of that u can make it to a decent lounge track.

[RWise]

Liking the direction of the track. Nice atmosphere so far.

In my opinion what needs work is the percussion groove. I dont really think the breakbeat kick rhythm that comes in later does anything for the track.

I think you should keep the kick 4/4 and have some minimal-tech inspired percussion grooves going on. Like this as an example.

youtu.be/2VfknWMS4hk

[juodas]

thanks for a feedback guys

[tsaro]

|Some cool laid back groove going on here. Kind of agree with Rwise there, that broken beat section doesn't really fit. I'd copy it into a new project and start use it for something else as it's interesting in its own right.

That delayed slightly vocal-ish ehh sound right on the beat isn't really doing it for me, and as it progresses the rhythm gets a little messy, there's enough to work with/do here.

I could tell you to clean it up etc though you were drunk whhen you did it, so I say get on with it!