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 Post subject: Hanos- Motives
PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2018 7:39 pm 
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any thoughts on this one?


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 Post subject: Re: Hanos- Motives
PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2018 9:05 pm 
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That resonant/acid-ish note that comes in at around 1:30 is a bit dry I think, could use a bit more reverb/delay/FX.


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 Post subject: Re: Hanos- Motives
PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2018 12:24 pm 
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thanks for your input dubdub
isnt it too clean for your taste?


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 Post subject: Re: Hanos- Motives
PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2018 12:50 am 
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It's a nice vibe. The high sound that comes in at 0.48 could do with some modulation and or filtering. It sounds quite static and I found myself tuning into it more than i wanted to, I realise this could be the required effect.

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 Post subject: Re: Hanos- Motives
PostPosted: Sat Feb 10, 2018 9:00 pm 
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not my kind of thing but low end and percussion sounds good, the little repetitive noise and its friend that comes in at different frequency are a bit annoying though


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 Post subject: Re: Hanos- Motives
PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2018 9:00 pm 
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bioniceye wrote:
thanks for your input dubdub
isnt it too clean for your taste?


Could be a bit dirtier for my taste but I didn' wanna sound like a broken record :lol:


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 Post subject: Re: Hanos- Motives
PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2018 1:06 pm 
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The whole mix is a bit too dry, it leaves it feeling quite flat and lifeless.
Some more reverb, subtle delays, a little chorus here and there would do wonders to open this mix up and stop all the elements from sitting right on the speaker cones.

The bassline is a little uneven, some notes are more resonant than other, which makes it a little messy.
You could deal with this a number of ways.... more compression to control the energy differences, or finding the hertz value of the notes that poke out and then notching them back with eq a little until the bassline sits more evenly (or just using velocity to keep the sound more even).

at 48 seconds this little ringing whistle/bell thing comes in....it`s just.....horrible, all the way through the mix, doesn`t seem to add anything other than just being a sound that really annoys you.


These kind of tunes get by on the quality of each sound being..... of good quality, as they have nowhere to hide, so I think individual sounds need care and attention to make this sweeter to the ears. It feels flat and weirdly digital (even if it isn`t).

Balance wise, the mix holds together well.

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 Post subject: Re: Hanos- Motives
PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2018 7:06 pm 
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thanks for listening and the feedback
some good points to think about in the future
it seems i need to experiment more with distortion to add some warmth to the mix
and dont over eqing things, i think thats makes it sounds lifeless and digital


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 Post subject: Re: Hanos- Motives
PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2018 8:43 pm 
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Yeah, it's sounds lifeless anyway it's good, pad could have more reverb in my opinion, bass is fine, I think void mention everything you need to do anyway, however would sound great with a nice cup of coffee in a morning ;)

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 Post subject: Re: Hanos- Motives
PostPosted: Thu Feb 15, 2018 5:13 pm 
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I think there's too much going at 175~220 Hz.. its resonating through the whole song...

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