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 Post subject: Deep Minor (Fast, moody, deep house inspired techno)
PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2018 11:45 pm 
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So this was originally meant to be a house track. I made a house beat to go alongside the original chords but i started speeding up the project more and more and before you know, it turned into a techno tip...

Happy with the end result though. Tried to add a lot of groove throughout and im happy with the overall moodiness of the track.

Would love to know if you think its shit or like it, with constructive words. :)

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https://soundcloud.com/renewise/rene-wi ... or/s-yFvgG

(Unmastered just so you know)


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 Post subject: Re: Deep Minor (Fast, moody, deep house inspired techno)
PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 3:59 pm 
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I like the mix and all the sounds but the big problem in the track is that the chords don't really resolve because of the two step progession. It creates a very uneasy, nervous atmosphere that doesn't fit with the house-y sound of the chords. You need to add maybe two or three more steps to the progression (can be sporadically, just a resolve at some point).

I think the track also needs another melodic element towards the second half, maybe a melodic pad an octave higher or a string.


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