'Mr Tubbs' - Jordanneke

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Re: 'Mr Tubbs' - Jordanneke

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Thanks for the comments lads.
it’s DJ tool stuff that’s not going to set the world on fire but I guess you know that anyway.
Aint that the truth. I'll have that on my gravestone. :D

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@Myname. I'll take a look and see what I did.

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I like the first 4 minutes, but I think the arrangement after that could use some work, especially right after the breakdown. Kinda sounds more like an intro of a track, instead of something that comes after the breakdown. I don't mean it needs to be full on cheese after that, the breakdown just kinda promises something else than just the basic drum pattern.

If I had this file/record the arrangement would be the main reason why I wouldn't play it out. I would remember it as "that track where nothing happens after the promising first 4 minutes".
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