Cloaked - The Devil You Know

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Cloaked
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Cloaked - The Devil You Know

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Something from last year I never finished. I'm too lazy. Basic but maybe someone likes it!


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over9000
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Re: Cloaked - The Devil You Know

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i like it!
why dont you finish it, its nice

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jordanneke
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Re: Cloaked - The Devil You Know

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Man, I'm a fan of your stuff. Great productions.

But that metal pipe banging snare is really off-putting. It ruins it for me. Perhaps a more conventional sizzling reverbed snare?

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Thanks guys! Solid feedback as ever Jordan. Will try it out.

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Youve got some nice variations in there, its pretty relenting with the militant hats, i like the metal hit maybe use it a bit less tho or automate it instead of it feeling like a metronome. Put a break in, add an intro and outro, some bigger bridging automations and youd have a nice track. :D

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Re: Cloaked - The Devil You Know

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Sounds nice, the highpass-filtering is a bit offputting though. The mix sounds a bit dull without the pad but I guess that can create a contrast.


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