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therottencircle
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Valet

Post by therottencircle »

live jam + some ableton editing .

I enjoyed the making of this track because it catched my attention from the beginning to the end (and that happens not often :D)

thats why i shared it with you guys . I'm curious about your thoughts .

All your comments are welcome.

Thanks.


https://soundcloud.com/therottencircle/valet

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Lowend is too saturated, if you still want that saturation, layer it with something dry to get some punch and transients back.

Actually, the whole mix could use a bit of easing up on the saturation.

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I'd play with kick's velocity a little. Besides that everything sounds nice to me.

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thanks for feedback i´ll keep that in mind

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I really liked this. Great arrangement and soundscape.

Few things to consider.
- The mid- and high range sounds bit muffled to me.
- The rimshot pattern is in my opinion piercing too much through the mix.
- More apparent 909-hihats needed. Them starting around 5 mins saves the game.

I had missed your earlier tracks and had to listen them as well. Excellent stuff.


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